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Use of plusperfect
Hi all
I am writing a first-person novel. The action opens with the protagonist in a tight spot, speaking in the present tense.
He then reviews everything that has led him to that moment — around 150 pages of action.
Now, I know I need to use pluperfect for when my protagonist is looking back, so the reader knows where they are in time.
However, I find plusperfect works better for passages of prose than it does dialogue (of which there is quite a bit). I feel the whole ‘she’d said ‘I’d said’ thing begins to intrude over extended passages of dialogue.
So my question is this: Is it okay to open such passages with plusperfect, but then segue into plain past tense, so the reader knows where they are in time but the reading experience is a little more streamlined?
I’d like to use plusperfect once for each speaker, before switching to past tense (and then back to plusperfect for the last para, which is nearly always prose.
Has anyone come across examples of published writers doing something similar?
Thanks in advance for any pointers.