Psychologist Dr. Emily Harper feels trapped in her dimly lit study, haunted by a cryptic phone call. A voice from the past speaks of forgotten memories—and her unsettling connection to Whispering Pines. What hidden secrets are buried in her history, and why has the past come calling now?

The room suffocates her, but running won’t silence the tru…

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A forgotten kingdom. A haunted forest. An ancient curse that refuses to stay buried.

Psychologist Emily Harper never believed in the sinister legends of the lost kingdom of Whispering Pines—until the night she stumbles into its cursed depths. Drawn to an ancient altar glowing with eerie blue light, Emily inadvertently awakens a long-dormant m…

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Say you’re looking for a fantasy novel.

What keywords would you type into the amazon search bar.

My Dark Fantast Horror book is available on Amazon for $4.99.

Is too high to stay competitive on Amazon or should I lower the price.

It’s Oxfords ex wife

Does this blurb tell you what to expect in my mystery novel.

Over a decade ago, a brutal murder shattered the peaceful valley of Arthur’s Point. Now, private investigator Oxford Hedgecock takes on his first case: proving the innocence of Scott Samson, a man imprisoned for a crime he swears he didn’t commit.

What begins as a routine investigation…

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Thank you

Heare’s another idea that I came up with.

A young married couple have just signed their home loans documents at the bank and 2 days later they turn up dead with a crucifix craved into the forehead. Then the case goes cold. Enter PI oxford Hedgecock 5 years later who is hired by the victim’s family. Oxford discovers that there have 10 such killings…

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What if a young healer was bound by a curse to serve a mysterious phantom trapped in mirrors, only to find that each life she saved gave him more power to escape? And what if a powerful organization hunted her kind to control that very magic? 📖 Would you read a story like this? 👻✨

I’m doing research before I start working on the novel.

Would you read a thriller about it?

Thanks for the advice

Which of these taglines do you like best.

Edge of Oblivion

– “When you’re standing on the edge, there’s nowhere to hide.”

– “One step closer, and everything unravels.”

– “In the shadows, secrets thrive.”

– “How far would you go to escape the truth?”

– “The closer you get, the darker it becomes.”

– “Some lines should never be c…

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Which thriller title best resonates with you?

Edge of Oblivion

The Clock’s Final Ticking

Last Whisper in the Dark

The Vanishing Hour

Lies Under Midnight

What do readers look for when reading a thriller novel?

What resonates the thriller with readers?

Should I remove or rewrite repeat phrases.

“A high-profile lawyer wakes up beside a dead body, racing to clear his name and uncover a sinister conspiracy.”

Any feedback on this blurb is most appreciated.

Is Wilma Radcliffe really dead?

Arthur’s Point, July 2015, and renowned psychiatrist Wilma Radcliffe was murdered. Her body was found in her burnt-out ruins of the house she shared with ex-husband, Oxford Hedgecock; a lawyer turned private investigator. But Oxford wasn’t convinced. That’s if any o…

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My children’s book The Kindness Club by Alex Spade made it all the way to number one on Amazon.

The drinks are on me lol

Author’s Note:

In The Secret Life of Wilma Radcliffe, I sought to explore the depths of human complexity and the hidden truths that can shape our lives in profound and unexpected ways. Set against the backdrop of a devastating fire and the ensuing investigation, the story delves into the mysterious past of Wilma Radcliffe, a psychiatrist with a…

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Does hook you?

As private investigator Oxford Hedgecock faces the crushing weight of addiction and the devastating depths of loss, he must negotiate the perilous path to healing.

To save himself and the things he cares about, he must face his demons directly as he is consumed by alcohol and haunted by the ghosts of his past.

Amid his broken life, he…

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Any thoughts

Dive into a world where the stars whisper secrets, galaxies dance, and the magic of wonder awaits in “Harmony’s Celestial Crescendo: The Everlasting Tale of the Keepers of Wonder.” Unveil the extraordinary adventure that awaits, where the ordinary becomes extraordinary, and where the power of kindness echoes through the cosmic…

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This blurb is brief and to the point.

Twelve years ago, a man who was innocent of a murder charge requested a local private investigator, Oxford Hedgecock, to review the case and the evidence to identify who the true murderer was.

The Patients Recovery.

This is supposed to be a psychological thriller.

Dr. Emily Harper struggles with the shards of reality and delusions in the mysterious Pinecrest institution, where the air is thick with secrets and shadows.

Emily becomes caught up in a dark alliance between Pinecrest and an extraterrestrial force as she sets out on a psychological quest to unravel the secrets of Whispering Pines.

The devastating…

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This is the blurb for a Romance Novel featuring a female protagonist.

In the heart of Sydney, where ambition meets opportunity, Jessica embarks on a journey of love, passion, and self-discovery in “Uncharted Hearts.”

As a rising star in the competitive world of graphic design, Jessica’s career unfolds against the backdrop of a pulsating cityscape.…

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I’ve added a detail about the cold case.

“Injustice Unveiled” reopens the door to a haunting 12-year-old cold case of Oxford’s ex-wife Wilma Radcliffe that has lingered in the shadows of an unsuspecting town. When private investigator Oxford Hedgecock is reluctantly drawn into the past, he unravels a web of secrets and buried truths, reopening wou…

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Thanks

Any initial thoughts

Chapter 1

In the soft glow of the candlelit restaurant, David couldn’t shake the nervous energy coursing through him. The velvet box housing the symbol of his love felt weightier than ever in his trembling hands. As he looked across the table at Jessica, her eyes radiant yet uncertain, his heart pounded with a mix of…

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Any initial thoughts?

Chapter 1

As the morning sun cast a golden glow over the quaint village of Willowbrook, Eliza stood before the mirror, her reflection adorned in ivory lace and satin. Today was supposed to be the happiest day of her life, the day she’d dreamed of since she was a little girl, and yet, an invisible storm brewed within her.

Amidst…

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Thanks for your feedback

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In the chilling aftermath of a crime that time almost forgot, “Injustice Unveiled” reopens the door to a haunting 12-year-old cold case that has lingered in the shadows of an unsuspecting town. When private investigator Oxford Radcliffe is reluctantly drawn into the past, he unravels a web of secrets and buried…

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CHAPTER 1

His heart raced as he clutched a hastily scribbled note in his trembling hands. The words on the paper echoed in his mind like an ominous refrain: Deliver the money or your family will pay the price.

Lyle Andrews, with his neatly combed hair and a face that had never seen the inside of a police station, felt the weight of an unfamiliar…

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This is the blurb to my psychological thriller Bloodstain Whispers in Apartment Five.

In the haunting concrete halls of Apartment Five, a detective with a dark past battles to unearth the truth behind a series of chilling murders. As each lifeless body surfaces, whispers of bloodstains echo in the depths of his troubled mind. Haunted by his demons,…

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I’m unsure whether this is a Romance or a Mystery—any Initial thoughts?

Chapter 1

It’s not much fun for Eliza de Lacey, a twenty-year-old receptionist stuck in a hotel in Honolulu with no money, especially during the Christmas holidays. She had a premonition. It was depressing. I felt like an old house cleaner, guilty about all the money I’d spent o…

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Thanks for the input.

I have reworked this but it still needs some work.

Chapter 1

Vomit rushed down my heaving throat and into the toilet bowl. “Why do I put myself through this?” I groaned, my voice a rasp.

The toilet bowl seemed to sympathize, emitting a gurgling sound as if to say, “Trust me, I’ve seen worse.” My eyes flickered open. As I mustered all my strength to…

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Now that I have read it, I can see what you mean. Thanks for pointing it out.

Apart from that is there any other issues that I need to know about.

How does this feel to you as a reader. Does it make sense as that’s one of the problems I’m having?

Chapter 1

Vomit rushed down my heaving throat and into the toilet bowl. “Why do I put myself though this?” I groaned my voice a rasp.

The toilet bowl seemed to sympathize, emitting a gurgling sound as if to say, “Trust me, I’ve seen worse.” My eyes…

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Thanks. I’ll do that.

My book is called In the Name of Justice.

It’s about a private investigator who is hired by an ex-con to find the killer of the PI’s ex-wife. As he investigates, he treads on toes of a dangerous drug kingpin who kidnaps his daughter.

Does anyone have any ideas for the cover so that it will stand out?

How about this for the title of my crime thriller?

‘The ex-wife who knew too much’

I am now following you on instagram.

If you want to follow me you can do by visiting Andyfox41.

This is what my mystery novel is about. Could someone tell me how they envisage the cover? What elements would you recommend for the cover, that includes the title as it’s too generic?

FOX: SECRETS

<b align=”center”>SYNOPSIS

Oxford Hedgecock, a lawyer turned private detective, receives a visit from Scott Samson, the man convicted of murdering…

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What type of books do you like to read?

I have just published my 4th book Shattered Illusions by Alexandra Steele on Amazon.

Thanks. Would you buy it when published.

This is a Romantic Suspense novel.

Chapter 1

Shattered Illusions

The sleek, glass façade of Strat Corp Tower loomed over the cityscape, its reflective surface giving nothing away about the ruthless machinations within. The bustling lobby, a symphony of hushed conversations and clicking heels, masked the corporate intrigue that permeated every floor.…

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This is the first couple of pages to my political thriller.

Chapter 1

<bdo>”You’re a true-blue Aussie,”</bdo> Wayne Oke remarked, a hint of a smile tugging at the corners of his mouth. <bdo>”‘Sparrow,’ that’s not even your proper name. You’re a spy through and through. So, are you going to sit here and try to convince me otherwise?”</bdo>

“The s…

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