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  Query letter

  Posted by Rinat Harel on 7 November 2023 at 11:47

  Hi all! I would love your thoughts on the attached query letter–million thanks!!

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  CLARE LOUISE ANDERSON replied 8 months, 1 week ago 2 Members · 1 Reply

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  CLARE LOUISE ANDERSON

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  25 June 2024 at 18:25

  Hi – I like that you personalised it and used one of their clients in the letter.

  Can you condense the blurb into one paragraph (I know it’s hard) I think this will help to keep the letter shorter. If they want to know more they can read it in the synopsis.

  Also have you considered saying a bit more about yourself – hobbies, some fun facts?

  Hope that helps 😊

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